Saturday, September 18, 2010

Risk # 2

He was walking slowly, looking at the pieces of flesh before him, a predator on the prowl.

We were the willing prey, waiting to be devoured.

I leaned against the wall, letting the darkness hide as much as it can. I watched as he paused in front of the others and examined each one, slowly making his way to me. He passed by each one, seemingly unsatisfied.

Then he came to me and stopped. He stared at my face before his gaze crept down slowly until it reached my shoes, then came back up. He smiled and moved closer; he had chosen his target for the night. My heart beat fast as we stood inches from each other. I knew what was about to happen. It was something I had been wanting to experience, but at that moment, when it was actually happening, I found myself scared. I wanted to run away but I had allowed myself to stray too close to escape.

I moved towards the seats but he stopped me; he wanted me right there. He pounced without warning, going for my neck first. I felt his lips, his teeth and his tongue on my skin. One hand crept to my head and the other one to my back. He pulled me closer and buried his face further as I tried to stifle a moan.

The others moved in to cover us as he slowly moved his way down.

I closed my eyes as I felt my pants being pulled down. My mind was too clouded with lust and fear to do anything else. Heck, if I had been thinking clearly, I would not have gone there in the first place. It was something that I had been craving for, and every caress of his fingers, every rub of his palm and every flick of his tongue only fuelled that craving.

Then he suddenly stopped. He stood up, turned around and pushed down his trousers. I realized what he wanted me to do. I knew at the back of my mind that it was too risky, but by then I was already too intoxicated with pleasure to resist.

We were both panting. My arms were wrapped around his waist and I was thrusting with total abandon. His whimpers were delicious; it was as if the tables had been turned. I drove harder and harder, desperate for release. There was a gun fight in front of us. Cars were flying. I was vaguely able to make out an explosion as I reached my own climax.

I looked around us while trying to regain my senses. The others were smiling, obviously satisfied with the double feature. Some even clapped their hands. Others tried to have a taste, like they assumed that they were going to get their turn, but I was too spent. I slowly walked out. The doors have not even closed yet when I broke into a run.


I wrote this a couple of months ago. Some of you may have read this already in Alterjon's blog. I asked him to publish it for me since I can't publish this back then. 


  1. true story? Joke...wehehehe. Aayn ha, may blog na daw ako...

  2. tanda ko nasa blog ito ni alterjon eh.
    sure ako kasi pareho yung naimagine ko XD

  3. had things been different, you wouldn't be posting this entry here. i guess..

  4. This was just too delectable. I have to say, with a more expressed attention to detail, you can earn from writing this kind of kinky shit. You gave me images that I could sure use for later.

    You can do homo-erotic. Do more!

    Cheers you!

  5. @Tristan: you have no idea. lol.

    @Hayme: eh pano pag sinabi kong oo? =P

    @jonnie: haha. sige idetalye mo yang naimagine mong yan.

    @alter: let's not dwell on the what-ifs. it's taxing. party party na lang. =D

    @Momel: Lol. I was trying to write about the experience, not the act itself. I tried. Lol.

  6. sorry for no comments before. i'm starting to backread this blog. :)

  7. hhhhhhhhmmm...Ndi nga..true story to?

  8. oh my oh my oh my. ngayon ko palang pala nakikilala si jayson. hmmmmm.

  9. @nimmy: nimmy, gumising ka! *sabay sampal sampal*

    @mike: hey, thanks for dropping by. =)

    @nicos: hulaan mo =P

    @jepoy: um.. sige shut up lang ako. lol.

    @citibuoy: yeah. ako nga. hehe.

  10. ikaw pala yun?
    ahehe. kunyari di ko alam :P

  11. Sinehan? naalala ko when I blogged about my experience in alta, you commented "matagal ko ng gusto ko magcomment dito pero di pwede". at the time medyo duda nako kung bakit.

  12. @ced: nasabi ko ba to sayo dati?

    @orally: haha akala ko walang makakahulang sa sinehan to. in fairness. nag succeed ako sa pagsusulat. lol.